With review titles like that, I really wish I had this thing finished! It drives me forward, that’s for sure.
“Thanks for the chance to read your story I loved it. I don’t really pick up a lot of fantasy books but to be honest, for me, you don’t delve too deep into the fantasy side – so far as i’ve read anyway – and having read this extract I love to know more about this fantasy world and what happens in it. You certainly got me hooked.”
There was more, including a couple of tips for improvement, but I won’t brag, too much… Can’t dwell on these – got to get stuck in with forward progress. Right… once the bubba is asleep and my brain awake.