… Chapter 2 coming.
Yes, I am doing a fairly major re-write. Not changing anything fundamental. The plot still stands. But, I wanted to add more detail to the setting and general description, and I think I have done that. And, I decided to give Llewella better motivation to get out of Cheer. Also, I finally came up with a way to keep Llewella’s gender a secret from Jonas and Alvaro a little bit longer – don’t worry, they will find out early enough not to change the story greatly. This was what I had planned originally. I was always a bit disappointed in myself for letting it be revealed so early. Thank Deadwood for the remedy.