New Chapter 10

DebE —  June 8, 2011 — Leave a comment

Well, I’ve done it. I’ve made the changes to Chapter 10. Since I removed more than I needed to re-type, I have moved what was going to be part of the first segment of Chapter 11 into Chapter 10, keeping my chapter lengths relatively consistent.

The main change is when Llewella goes to visit Cassidy’s mother. Before and after that is still the same. And then there is a new approx 500 words to end the chapter. I hope it is still a good “hang-point”, as I like to think of a good chapter ending. I may have to play with it again in future. But, for now, it lets me keep moving forward.

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Deb E was born in New Zealand’s North Island, but her parents corrected that within months, moving south to Dunedin and staying there. Childhood nights were spent falling asleep to cover versions of Cliff Richard and the Shadows and other Rock ’n Roll classics played by her father’s band, and days were spent dancing to 45 LPs. Many of her first writing experiences were copying down song lyrics. She graduated to scientific reports when she studied a nematophagus fungus in the Zoology department of the University of Otago, trading all traces of popularity for usefulness… then traded both for fiction. Mum of one human & four fur-babies.

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