Well, I’ve done it. I’ve made the changes to Chapter 10. Since I removed more than I needed to re-type, I have moved what was going to be part of the first segment of Chapter 11 into Chapter 10, keeping my chapter lengths relatively consistent.
The main change is when Llewella goes to visit Cassidy’s mother. Before and after that is still the same. And then there is a new approx 500 words to end the chapter. I hope it is still a good “hang-point”, as I like to think of a good chapter ending. I may have to play with it again in future. But, for now, it lets me keep moving forward.