Chapter Eight

DebE —  May 28, 2011 — Leave a comment

… the Chapter with one of those scenes we just love to read. Especially us women.

Don’t forget, comments are always welcome! My goal here is to make this story the best I can. It is a first draft, so I hope for some leniency, but constructive criticism is extremely valuable. I’ll acknowledge everyone who comments! (Although, if something strange happens, and heaps of people comment before this gets published, then it may have to be a group acknowledgement).

So, up to this point, I think I have established my characters’ relationships, and I have introduced my antagonist and given a hint of what he might be capable of, as well as his limitations. Very soon I will delve into the real meat of the story. That’s right, there is more to come!



Deb E was born in New Zealand’s North Island, but her parents corrected that within months, moving south to Dunedin and staying there. Childhood nights were spent falling asleep to cover versions of Cliff Richard and the Shadows and other Rock ’n Roll classics played by her father’s band, and days were spent dancing to 45 LPs. Many of her first writing experiences were copying down song lyrics. She graduated to scientific reports when she studied a nematophagus fungus in the Zoology department of the University of Otago, trading all traces of popularity for usefulness… then traded both for fiction. Mum of one human & four fur-babies.

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