… the Chapter with one of those scenes we just love to read. Especially us women.
Don’t forget, comments are always welcome! My goal here is to make this story the best I can. It is a first draft, so I hope for some leniency, but constructive criticism is extremely valuable. I’ll acknowledge everyone who comments! (Although, if something strange happens, and heaps of people comment before this gets published, then it may have to be a group acknowledgement).
So, up to this point, I think I have established my characters’ relationships, and I have introduced my antagonist and given a hint of what he might be capable of, as well as his limitations. Very soon I will delve into the real meat of the story. That’s right, there is more to come!